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Wednesday, 24 June 2020

Writing snippet.



¨I am furious at you leaving me in the desert! ¨ screamed Jimantha, waking up the whole neighbourhood. ¨CRASH¨ Jimmy shut the door and went back to bed while Jimantha was outside. 1 year later Jimmy found a new wife and she was much nicer. Now Jimmy is as happy as he could ever be!
Here is my writing snippet. I am amost done with my writing I am up to editing so I should be able to post the full writing soon!

2 comments:

  1. howdy gab this looks really cool
    one thing just make sore to keep the words in the page dont worry i do it to
    :)

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