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Tuesday, 16 June 2020

Writing snippet pt 2!

‘Ok we can try it.’ Whispered Jimmantha ‘We go on my count 1… 2… 3… GO!’ 
‘AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HELP US PLEASE!!!!!!!!!’ Yelled  Jimmy and Jimantha together


This is more of my narative story.
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3 comments:

  1. Hello Gabby! I really like this snippet. I would love to read your story it sounds very interesting! Maybe next time you could add more to your blog post.

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  2. Hi Gabby,
    This sounds great you definitely need to show me this when its done!
    I would like to see more on your blog though so maybe you could add more next time but anyway,
    Keep up the amazing work!

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