‘Ok we can try it.’ Whispered Jimmantha ‘We go on my count 1… 2… 3… GO!’
‘AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HELP US PLEASE!!!!!!!!!’ Yelled Jimmy and Jimantha together
This is more of my narative story.
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Hello Gabby! I really like this snippet. I would love to read your story it sounds very interesting! Maybe next time you could add more to your blog post.
ReplyDeleteOk thank you.
DeleteHi Gabby,
ReplyDeleteThis sounds great you definitely need to show me this when its done!
I would like to see more on your blog though so maybe you could add more next time but anyway,
Keep up the amazing work!