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Friday, 26 June 2020

Jimmy and Jimantha get lost!

“Ahhhhhh get me out of here and let me in the pool!” screamed Jimantha. “Jimmy, this is all your fault, If you didn't distract the pilot, there would not be sand in my old toes!”  

“Ok ok I'm sorry but there was not enough food you told me to get more, so I did,” whispered Jimmy. 

“I heard that errrrrrrrrr just go sit in the corner and dont talk to me,” screamed Jimantha. 
If you are wondering, yes they are married! 

Jimmy and Jimantha are from a word called Tatooine. Jimmy and Jimantha look like pac man ghosts, just with arms and legs. Jimmy is the nice one out of the two he is always happy and before they went on the holiday Jimmy was a gym teacher! So Jimmy always has a smile on his face! Jimantha is always angry and before they got stuck in the desert Jimantha didn't have a job, she just sat on the couch all day and did nothing but anyway back to the story.


They are here on a holiday to South Africa and they got lost in the desert because the flight attendant didn't give them enough food and they both love food so Jimmy went to the pilot to complain and get more food… and he distracted the pilot so the plane went down with a CRASH! ‘What about the Co-pilot?’ said Jimantha. 

‘H H H He was asleep’ Said Jimmy, being very nervous. ‘Jimmantha!’ said Jimmy. 

‘WHAT?’ Screamed Jimmantha ’im still mad at you.’ 

‘Ok I'm sorry but what if we booth scream and mabey someone will hear us!’ Said Jimmy with a smile on his face. 

‘Ok we can try it.’ Whispered Jimmantha ‘We go on my count 1… 2… 3… GO!’ 

‘AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HELP US PLEASE!!!!!!!!!’ Yelled  Jimmy and Jimantha together. Sadly, nobody came to help them. They tried one more time but screamed harder! 

‘SOMEONE PLEASE HELP US WE ARE STUCK HELP.’ SCREAMD Jimmy and Jimantha. But nobody heard them:( 


Jimmy went for a walk to try to find something to help them get out of the desert he didn't tell Jimmantha because she would just yell at him because she doesn't like Jimmy very much she just uses him for his money. Finally after walking for two hours Jimmy finally found something to help him get out of the desert. He saw the thing he needed. It was amazing, it was beautiful, it was… A CAR!!!!! The keys were just left in the car so Jimmy got in the car and tried to start it but it didn't work because he doesn't know how to work a car. Jimmy was so excited he tried to start the car repeatedly but it didn't work:( He tried to put the music on in the car and there was music but it was just in his head because it was just a dream! Jimmy continued to walk and walk for hours on end when he came across a wild pack of lions!! Jimmy thought to himself ¨Oh no I will die, what are these lions thinking? ¨ 

Jimmy went a little closer to the lions and realised that they were fake and they had put a radio behind the lions. The fake lions were put there to stop intruders coming into their tribe. Jimmy walked straight  past the ¨lions¨ and went into the tribe. All the tribe members jumped out in front of Jimmy and scared him! Jimmy sat with the tribe members and told them his whole story for being in the middle of the desert. All the tribe members helped him get to Cape Town. “We will head off in the morning” Said the leader of the tribe.

The next morning they all woke up bright and early except for Jimmy because Jimmy is not a morning person at all. So all the tribe members got pots and pans to wake together so they could wake Jimmy up. ¨WAKE UP SLEEPY HEAD¨ Yelled the whole tribe. Jimmy eventually got up, and they all rode on the camel to Cape Town. After about three hours they got to their destination. Jimmy went straight to the water park so he could just relax and have some fun! Later that night Jimmy heard screaming and yelling from the desert, he knew it was Jimantha still lost in the desert! The next day Jimmy went back home in a helicopter and flew past Jimantha. Jimmy didn't feel bad for Jimantha at all! 5 minutes later the helicopter pilot said ¨should we pick up that person? ¨ ¨NO¨ said Jimmy ¨please just let me go home!¨ 

5 hours later Jimmy was finally home in his warm and cosy bed when there was  a knock at his door… It was Jimantha!
 ¨Um Jimantha, what are you doing here? ¨ said Jimmy. 
¨I am furious at you leaving me in the desert! ¨ screamed Jimantha, waking up the whole neighbourhood. ¨CRASH¨ Jimmy shut the door and went back to bed. Jimmantha was still trying to get in, but it didn't work. She tried breaking the door down that didn't work, so she tried to throw a rock at one at the window but that didn't work either.

1 year later Jimmy found a new wife, and he was as happy as he could ever be. He was now a spy and his wife is a spy too! One day they got called to the biggest job they have ever done. The job they had been called to was in Russia. That was where Jimmy and Jimantha used to live. Then they drove to the location that their boss gave them and when they got there Jimantha was standing outside like, she knew they were coming. Jimmy and his wife got out of the car… and Jimantha tried to shoot them with a gun (it was just a toy gun!) Jimmy soon realised that Jimantha had a toy gun. Jimmy went up to Jimantha and kicked the gun out of her hand and told Stella (Jimmys wife) to call the police! 5 minutes the police came, and they searched Jimanthas house and found that she had been hiding bucket loads of toy guns so she could scare people. The next day Jimantah got put in jail and Jimmy and Stella eventually got home and lived a happy life! 

 THE END. 

WALT:write an engaging narrative!
This is my blog post about my narrative. It is a work in progress I also have not edited my story yet. I wrote about Jimmy and Jimantha because one day when my class was doing meditation and I was drawing so I just drew a random character and I named it! Did Jimmy get out of the desert? please leave a pth comment.

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