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Thursday, 2 July 2020

Haikus

1. It's a Hot day!
I want to go for a swim.
So I can cool off! 

2.My dogs like to eat.
My dogs like to go for walks. 
My  dogs lve outside. 
In writing we are leaning about poems and todays one that I did was a Haiku. Haikus are a Japanese form of poetry, it has 3 lines the first line has 5 syllables then 7 syllables then the last line has 5 syllables again. If you do not know what a syllable is it is the sound in a word. For example: elephant has 3 syllables (el- e- phants.) I hope you enjoyed my blog post about Haikus and make sure to comment one of your Haikus. 
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  1. Anonymous24 July 2020 at 10:32

    Kia Ora Gabby,I love your haikus there so creative but for your fist one in the first line theres on 4 syllables so make sure you just check your work before you post it :)

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  2. Anonymous24 July 2020 at 10:34

    Hi Gabby! I like your hiakus and the facts you added in the description. I like how you've added 2 hikaus and not just on ! Next time double check your spelling with the sentence ¨My dogs I've outside´ Keep it up!

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  3. Anonymous24 July 2020 at 10:42

    Heyy Gabby
    I like how you gave information on what a haiku is.
    maybe double check you're spelling?
    other than that good job!

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